15 Nisan 2011 Cuma

the last sentence rocks

We are all agree with the phenomenon Jane Rickson's thought that everyone has a right to o private life out of civil liberties. Unless their behaviors threaten  society's security. It is easy to adapt public's interest to celebrities personal life. This sophisticated idea decreases the value of public's quality.
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  1. Richard Sehir18 Nisan 2011 05:51

    This is a very complicated few sentences. I think that you tried to get all the words into the text in as few sentences as possible. I am not sure without some of your own ideas in the middle of them what they mean but I can see clear evidence of accuracy in the grammar as you have for the most part used all the words in the correct form. I would rather use the blogs to comment on ideas rather than grammar however. Rabia, I like the music you included at the bottom, not sure what the singer is talking about but it is veru melodic. What is the name of the artist?

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  2. zeynep rabia19 Nisan 2011 04:38

    yes Richard as you sad we were very tired to get all the words into an paragraph and we all know our paragraph is meaningless :)


    they are a group and their group's name is Pinhani.

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